Beautiful organ, but make me dream... There, I see pictures for a organ manufacturer catalog. On top, there is too much grain / noise.
Dreaming is allowed. Dreaming of going there again I'd bring and tripod, a flash and a helping hand maybe. Invite a lesser number of other tourists. Other time of the day.
Less direct sun... a lot of fairy tale wishes.
Well, there is noise if the light is low and shadows creep in. Adding to that: small CX sensor. I don't mind it that much.
This is not glossy advertising. More documentary while walking by.
I have also a big problem with the framing:
(1) why all this front scene ?;
I like it with environment or straight on the nose. The latter I did not bring the equipment for.
I don't like shooting up at strange levels in geometric environments, a distant position helps de-fuzzing the capture.
Well, it may be cut-framed, but then the lighting deficits will be more prominent and balance will loose as well. (see attached)
(2) what has the ugly window to do there;
the world is ugly sometimes. tryptich as the organ framing. explains the ugly light spot. (see attached)
(3) portrait framing would enhance the organ pipes, now they are cut somewhere in the middle.
not available as it was not to my liking. the pipe mouths are. the copper dents are. does not pay off without the sun illuminated church room.
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Overall you have a penny in the right bucket - they could be better, but than there would be none and the organ go unnoticed for now.
Here you are:
2 - re-cut. do not like. background plays out too prosaic for my liking.
1 - re-cut 4/5 & 1/1. some more grain&noise surpression. could go with the 4/5th version.
