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Somnath Goswami

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« on: February 25, 2016, 15:32:02 »
Please forward your most valuable opinions .

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Re: Companion
« Reply #1 on: February 25, 2016, 16:00:09 »
The horizon might be levelled? The overall contrast could do with some enhancement.

Otherwise a nice mood, although in a detached manner. Meaning, getting closer would be beneficial.

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Re: Companion
« Reply #2 on: February 25, 2016, 16:02:15 »
It's a most valuable photo :)
The only thing that I could think of is that if you had shot it @14mm, you might have shot it @24mm and got the dogs to be a bit larger in the frame...
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Re: Companion
« Reply #3 on: February 25, 2016, 16:36:40 »
Wonderful warm tones, I like the clouds reflected on the ground around the silhouette of the dogs
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Re: Companion
« Reply #4 on: February 25, 2016, 16:38:48 »
Thanks all for your valuable suggestion.

I tried to correct the horizon but the sea surfs were breaking at an uneven angle so failed :-(

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Re: Companion
« Reply #5 on: February 25, 2016, 16:51:27 »
Somnath, a horizontal horizon is quite important the other angles will be what they will be. But what a lovely image!

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Re: Companion
« Reply #6 on: February 25, 2016, 17:17:32 »
Romantic but not Kitsch.

I feel Bjørn is right concerning the horizon, although it is difficult to see wth the shore line at an angle
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Re: Companion
« Reply #7 on: February 25, 2016, 17:21:51 »
Thanks Mike and Frank. Yes the tilt is there. Has to be corrected.

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Re: Companion
« Reply #8 on: February 25, 2016, 17:56:06 »
Lovely image. My first thought was also a straight horizon and a tighter framing. Colours are very nice.

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Re: Companion
« Reply #9 on: February 25, 2016, 18:13:11 »
And I also like the space as well.

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Re: Companion
« Reply #10 on: February 26, 2016, 03:39:48 »
Somnath, I really like the image.  Colours, reflected clouds and composition.  The horizon doesn't bother me but I really never 'cracked' the 14-24 2.8 , why I sold it.  I was always shooting at 20mm-24mm except for environmental portraits with the subject very close.  Seems as if every time I get that type of sky I am at home and 30 minutes away from any location to make use of it  >:( .  Maybe we'll get one of our big storms in April  :)
Thanks for posting .
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Re: Companion
« Reply #11 on: February 26, 2016, 06:30:02 »
Straightening the image is a must, as others have noted.  I would also crop the image to give the dogs more real estate, it will give the photo much more impact.

Consider that an image like this can be printed at much larger sizes than other images without looking bad because of the lack/unimportane of fine detail.  The colors, gradients and elements of the picture are it's strong points by far.  Don't worry about losing megapixels with the roatation and cropping.
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Re: Companion
« Reply #12 on: February 26, 2016, 07:59:26 »
Sorry for all the opposing opinions, but I like the way the picture is composed. We're at a beach, where the sky, horizon and the sand are the only elements beside the dogs. The dogs has an interesting interaction, but the other elements has little going on because of little contrast. I find that if you increase the contrast in the sky, in the beach to get the reflection from the sky to really stand out, the picture will have plenty going on. The foam dots in the bottom left corner also helps to frame the scene.

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Re: Companion
« Reply #13 on: February 26, 2016, 14:03:08 »
Somnath, I thinks the pleasant atmosphere is beautifully captured.

I tried to align the horizontal line with the edge of my computer screen and found that you only need to adjust it ever-so slightly.  As you say, the surf might make the image feel oblique, even if you correct the level perfectly.

Nevertheless, I love the atmosphere.
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Re: Companion
« Reply #14 on: February 26, 2016, 16:17:59 »
I did the same as Akira, with the same result.

I think it is a lovely image, and would perhaps trim a little off the bottom of the frame, but no more than a little.
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