Playtime 1

[Grahame Hamblin]

trying something different
Thoughts welcome please
Grahame

[Jakov Minić]

Comfortably placed in the pillow. Works for me 

[Grahame Hamblin]

Thanks Jakov

[Frank Fremerey]

I always love the mysterious in photography and you managed to add some mystery to a macro shot. Continue exploring!

[HCS]

I like it very much! Not too fond about the blueish/grayish patch. Not sure what it is/was, but perhaps it could be toned down a bit. It interferes a bit with the high key nature of the shot IMHO.

[Grahame Hamblin]

Thanks Frank I now think i may have slightly over done the blur ??
Grahae

[armando_m]

Beautifully done

I would not have added the frame

[Olivier]

I like the idea and think the image would benefit from less blur, with a smoother transition.

[Mongo]

agree it is a good idea and nice image . However, also agree the blur is perhaps not too much but certainly too sudden. A more gradual application over a greater distance might look more natural and pleasing.

[Grahame Hamblin]

Thank you all for your constructive comments its back to drawing board.