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armando_m

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portrait - smile
« on: October 29, 2016, 22:59:08 »
From a costumes contest

Window light, and sun hitting the floor

D800 + 85mm f1.8G

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Re: portrait - smile
« Reply #1 on: October 29, 2016, 23:04:54 »
perfect

appears slightly gritty-grainy, but probably OK, to be tested on a "real" print.

picture (curtains, model) look titled towards the left, but it does not disturb me. Brings some "movement".
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Re: portrait - smile
« Reply #2 on: October 29, 2016, 23:12:08 »
It is an ISO 1600 film simulation - Silver efex pro
and I decided to leave the tilt to the left

Thanks for commenting Airy
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Re: portrait - smile
« Reply #3 on: October 29, 2016, 23:24:26 »
We agree on the tilt. Since however the grain was deliberately introduced (not D800-like, indeed), what about a softer one ?
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Re: portrait - smile
« Reply #4 on: October 29, 2016, 23:33:11 »
The tilt, the 1600 ISO, and the model are fantastic :)
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Re: portrait - smile
« Reply #5 on: October 29, 2016, 23:49:08 »
Thanks Jakov

Quote from: Airy on October 29, 2016, 23:24:26
We agree on the tilt. Since however the grain was deliberately introduced (not D800-like, indeed), what about a softer one ?
Without added grain
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Re: portrait - smile
« Reply #6 on: October 29, 2016, 23:51:42 »
Without added grain, and even softer, with more glow.
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Re: portrait - smile
« Reply #7 on: October 29, 2016, 23:56:58 »
even better I think.
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Re: portrait - smile
« Reply #8 on: October 30, 2016, 02:41:02 »
Fantastic poprtrait as it is.  To me, the ISO1600 grain doesn't look effective enough and the image can go well without it.
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Re: portrait - smile
« Reply #9 on: October 30, 2016, 06:53:05 »
The interaction between you and the lady says it all. Beautiful.
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Re: portrait - smile
« Reply #10 on: October 31, 2016, 09:57:11 »
Second version makes her look a lot better especially her skin!
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