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Bring springtime back
« on: October 16, 2016, 20:06:43 »
... without changing hemisphere. These were shot on May 1st IIRC, Df + Zeiss 50/2 MP.
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Re: Bring springtime back
« Reply #1 on: October 16, 2016, 22:18:46 »
Pity about the resistance - changing hemispheres is a GOOD idea :)
Airy - I find the images a tad hot.
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Re: Bring springtime back
« Reply #2 on: October 16, 2016, 22:24:12 »
Hot ? in which sense ? for sure the sunlight was very strong.
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Re: Bring springtime back
« Reply #3 on: October 16, 2016, 22:32:09 »
Yes I can see the sun must have been pretty hot and harsh. Especially difficult for portraits. The highlights are too bright IMHO.
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Re: Bring springtime back
« Reply #4 on: October 16, 2016, 22:51:45 »
Yes I also think they are a bit too bright for my liking.
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Re: Bring springtime back
« Reply #5 on: October 16, 2016, 22:52:35 »
The "alabaster" look was intentional, with relatively low contrast on the bright (but not blown) highlights. Well, I'll try and change that.
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Re: Bring springtime back
« Reply #6 on: October 17, 2016, 22:23:49 »
Just say it is infrared (which is does look like, did you convert by pushing the red channel?) and everyone will rave about it!
I like the first one a lot, she looks lost in enjoyable thoughts.

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Re: Bring springtime back
« Reply #7 on: October 17, 2016, 22:54:44 »
Yes, A strong push on the red channel, a lesser one on orange, and some reduction of blues & greens, plus reduction of clarity, which brings the whole in the neighborhood of IR. Manual operations.

The lens was wide open, so eyelashes are sharp and that's it.
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Re: Bring springtime back
« Reply #8 on: October 17, 2016, 22:57:37 »
For reference, this is the plain B&W conversion :
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Re: Bring springtime back
« Reply #9 on: October 17, 2016, 23:04:16 »
I just tried various settings using Silver Efex, but they generally do not work because of the marked shadow in front of her eyes. This is where the "red filter" and the clarity decrease will help.
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Re: Bring springtime back
« Reply #10 on: October 17, 2016, 23:08:25 »
The Alabaster idea is good, it just doesn't really fit this image with the other 'components' like the too hard shadows where they should not be,,,
Try it on a shot with like a huge softbox at high output,,,
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Re: Bring springtime back
« Reply #11 on: October 17, 2016, 23:24:18 »
Eric, this would be the way - but the pic was a snapshot while having a glass of champagne, back from a 2-hours dance practice on a fresh sunday morning. I'm afraid the softbox would have spoiled the mood. A fill-in flash would have helped, but I am nuts at that technique. The sun is, no doubt, the photographer's enemy...

Here's the second one, conventional treatment simulating Kodak Panatomic X (ISO 32), plus light sepia toning. Conveniently provided by Silver Efex. No filter, no clarity tweak. Somehow I was looking for a "punchy", 3-D rendering of her face, in line with the quite energetic dancing business before, and coping with the total absence of make-up etc. that precedes most contemporary photo shoots.

In the latter variation, I miss the piercing gaze of the first variation, that seemed to turn her brown eyes into blue ones. The effect of orange channel being pushed (full throttle).
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Re: Bring springtime back
« Reply #12 on: October 17, 2016, 23:28:10 »
Airy, I hope you don't mind, I wasn't trying to be rude. I love the image so much, I couldn't resist to take the opportunity to show you why. It was too difficult to explain in words. I am sorry I didn't ask for your permission first. Tell me if you want me to delete it.

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Re: Bring springtime back
« Reply #13 on: October 17, 2016, 23:31:30 »
I like the original version, if she was 19 when the images was shot.  Her youth shines in the original interpretation.  To me, the sepia treatment contradicts the reality worth cherishing.
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Re: Bring springtime back
« Reply #14 on: October 17, 2016, 23:34:21 »
Airy, I hope you don't mind, I wasn't trying to be rude. I love the image so much, I couldn't resist to take the opportunity to show you why. It was too difficult to explain in words. I am sorry I didn't ask for your permission first. Tell me if you want me to delete it.

No problem, a very interesting re-interpretation ! placing the focus where it should be, I guess
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