I like the gesture of the shot and the B&W...but there seems to be a bit of a halo around the people. Not sure if that is from the direction of the sun or from some shadow recovery in post.
Thank you for pointing it out Andrew, I went back and had a look at what I have done, and it seems that using U-points in Nik to dramatise the sky made this halo, which is a bit distracting.
Attached is an earlier version I did with less editing in the sky, and where the halo is much less.
I would appreciate a comment on the this one as well, although a bit more bland, the halo is much reduced.