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RBSinTo

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The man in number thirteen
« on: January 02, 2016, 22:00:21 »
There is a lovely, elderly gentleman who lives with his wife in the Kensington Market area in a house with the very rare address number thirteen.
Because he has serious health issues I often see him sitting on his porch with his oxygen tank and watching the world go by, and we often chat briefly when I pass.
On this particular day he happened to be looking out the front door window, and I asked him if I could take an informal portrait as he stood there.
He was kind enough to say yes and I got this shot.
Converted to black and white in Photoshop.
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Re: The man in number thirteen
« Reply #1 on: January 03, 2016, 07:06:15 »
For me its a strong image but its not coming to it's right  - and I suspect you know I would have liked the face better exposed :)
The face is too dark for me as this is where all the emotion lies.
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Re: The man in number thirteen
« Reply #2 on: January 03, 2016, 17:53:58 »
Normally, I would want to see the eyes ... but this works for me.
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Re: The man in number thirteen
« Reply #3 on: January 05, 2016, 08:23:54 »
I dig it.  If it wasn't for the 13, I'd prefer the face exposed brighter as well.  With the 13 the darker tone, combined with the light smile, is ominous yet light hearted.  I enjoy the contrast.
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Re: The man in number thirteen
« Reply #4 on: February 10, 2016, 21:21:07 »
I really like it. A lot. For me the exposure is spot on. The man being in the dark is what makes the shot for me. A hint of illness -even if you didn´t comment on it, is in the image- the unlucky number...It makes the character small, unimportant in relationship with everything around. It is sad. An imprisonment. Looking at life through the window. Illness. No luck. I´ve being caught in the situation. Emotionally charged.

  And of course, you got me already at "13"
 
  Thanks for sharing this.

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Re: The man in number thirteen
« Reply #5 on: February 11, 2016, 23:46:45 »
Thanks all, for the kind comments.
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