I love both images Anirban, though without your narrative the first one looks like could have been a fairly quiet part of the market.
I have no knowledge of Fujis, or what the 18-55 translates to in 35mm format terms, but whilst the second image works well I was surprised by the amount of distortion in the the lens. Guess having the person on the very edge of the left hand side accentuates this.
and just to confirm, this isn't meant as a criticism of your image or the lens (which I'm sure has many other excellent qualities)