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golunvolo

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Stage photo 1
« on: December 11, 2015, 17:32:35 »
Hello, this is from yesterday. Live show in Córdoba, Spain. Not very productive day but I still manage to savage some images. I put this one up for your consideration. Way bigger crop than I would like and some manipulation in Photoshop. Very unusual -for me-

  C&C welcome.


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Re: Stage photo 1
« Reply #1 on: December 11, 2015, 17:55:05 »
Really cool shot!  Only CC I can come up with is the image appears a bit tilted, to the left.  Perhaps I could be wrong.  I hope the performer gets a copy of this image.  :)
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Re: Stage photo 1
« Reply #2 on: December 11, 2015, 23:50:25 »
Very nice, Paco!
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Re: Stage photo 1
« Reply #3 on: December 12, 2015, 00:01:16 »
Yeeees...I like!
If I may suggest though: Intensify the red and rotate it clockwise just a tad.

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Re: Stage photo 1
« Reply #4 on: December 12, 2015, 02:11:14 »
Awesome Paco, great light and the falling red feathers on the black background really make the image for me.
Cheers,
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Re: Stage photo 1
« Reply #5 on: December 12, 2015, 03:35:44 »
Mind blowing shot. I'm amazed with the light, red feathers and how perfect is the moment when shutter was clicked.
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Re: Stage photo 1
« Reply #6 on: December 12, 2015, 22:15:00 »
Thank you all for the responses and suggestions. This is a second option with brighter and more saturated red as well as some increased contrast as well.

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Re: Stage photo 1
« Reply #7 on: December 13, 2015, 01:38:52 »
Great shot

v2 is an improvement IMO
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Re: Stage photo 1
« Reply #8 on: December 13, 2015, 04:53:06 »
Well done!  Agreed about the 2nd version being better.

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Re: Stage photo 1
« Reply #9 on: December 13, 2015, 06:55:21 »
The second version does look improved.  You captured a fine moment.

I may want to trim the left side to put the dancer in the center, though...
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Re: Stage photo 1
« Reply #10 on: December 15, 2015, 15:23:42 »
Wonderful shot! I like the crop and as Jan Anne says, the falling leaves really adds to the image.
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Re: Stage photo 1
« Reply #11 on: December 15, 2015, 15:44:54 »
Thank you all for your input. So far V2 is having better reponses, not only here so thanks again for your generous suggestions.
  I have tried to make the image perfectly straight and also to crop it to put the dancer in the center but I feel it looks better with those "imperfections" for the lack of a better word, because it gives movement and calls my attention?. Feel free to present a different view.


 

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Re: Stage photo 1
« Reply #12 on: December 16, 2015, 23:34:33 »
A few more from the same night.

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Re: Stage photo 1
« Reply #13 on: December 17, 2015, 04:40:56 »
wonderful series

And  I think 237 is just brilliant
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Re: Stage photo 1
« Reply #14 on: December 17, 2015, 05:56:18 »
The stage set using lamps hanging from above looks much better in these additional images, and I love the last two very much.

In comparison, the thread (chain?) hanging from the lamp in the first image is really distracting to me and it degrade the picture.  I remember seeing the similar stage setting in your iamge a while ago and thought the thread (tied to the on-off switch?) distracting, too.

Of course, it is not your fault, but I didn't like them, at least to my taste...
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