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Re: whisp er
« Reply #1 on: October 07, 2015, 20:34:37 »

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Re: whisp er
« Reply #2 on: October 07, 2015, 20:35:36 »

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Re: whisp er
« Reply #3 on: October 07, 2015, 20:49:41 »
I Really like the first image !
and the colors in the second one
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Re: whisp er
« Reply #4 on: October 07, 2015, 20:54:19 »
thank you Armando

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« Reply #5 on: October 07, 2015, 22:05:55 »
so gentle and soft looking! nice!
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Re: whisp er
« Reply #6 on: October 08, 2015, 06:51:02 »
thank you Elsa

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Re: whisp er
« Reply #7 on: October 08, 2015, 10:40:28 »
Particularly love the first one.
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Re: whisp er
« Reply #8 on: October 08, 2015, 12:01:15 »
The first one has the feel of a Japanese pencil drawing. Very wonderful.
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Re: whisp er
« Reply #9 on: October 08, 2015, 13:30:22 »
Particularly love the first one.

Thank you Jørgen

The first one has the feel of a Japanese pencil drawing. Very wonderful.

thank you Frank

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Re: whisp er
« Reply #10 on: October 08, 2015, 16:11:41 »
I love the first image. As it is nearly monochromatic ... you may want to think about going a bit more and convert to B&W. The plant in the lower right is a bit distracting, but I love the reflective looking plant in the shadows.
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Re: whisp er
« Reply #11 on: October 08, 2015, 17:29:53 »
The white one! As Gary said there's even several cropping/editing options available.

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Re: whisp er
« Reply #12 on: October 09, 2015, 07:25:28 »
I love the first image. As it is nearly monochromatic ... you may want to think about going a bit more and convert to B&W. The plant in the lower right is a bit distracting, but I love the reflective looking plant in the shadows.

The white one! As Gary said there's even several cropping/editing options available.

i'd thought of that Gary, Peter :) :)

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Re: whisp er
« Reply #13 on: October 09, 2015, 09:05:46 »
Flowers are a source of inspiration! Beautiful work.
#1 is my favourite too. Indeed, the sharper edges/contrast in the lower right in #2 take away attention of the beautiful tones and OOF in the left part.
I like how you separated light and dark in #3 but am just wondering how it looks when the "line" would be diagonal.
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Re: whisp er
« Reply #14 on: October 09, 2015, 09:53:31 »
Beautiful line and reflection in #1
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