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Frank Fremerey

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kosher
« on: August 22, 2015, 02:43:54 »
a present from my friend to my wife
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Re: kosher
« Reply #1 on: August 22, 2015, 16:30:07 »
I like the monochromatic feel of all the soft oranges/salmon colors. The OOF glass is a nice touch, but this photo says square format to me.
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Re: kosher
« Reply #2 on: August 22, 2015, 20:35:04 »
Gary. Can you cut it for me and show?
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Re: kosher
« Reply #3 on: August 23, 2015, 10:13:43 »
No, it is good crop...
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Re: kosher
« Reply #4 on: August 23, 2015, 12:40:28 »
Andrew. Is original frame.
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Re: kosher
« Reply #5 on: August 23, 2015, 16:35:13 »
Something like this:
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Re: kosher
« Reply #6 on: August 23, 2015, 16:36:40 »
I dunno, after looking at both I think your framing is better.
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Re: kosher
« Reply #7 on: August 23, 2015, 23:27:12 »
So, Gary, to the Why?

I play with two colours here: orange/red & green -- each in different shades but clearly in a colour contrast set up.

The distribution of sharpness aspect leads the eye towards the flower itself, which does "look" away from the onlooker.

The green elements give a natural framing to the peach colour of the rose, the protect the fragile structure from the borders.

The leading element is the leaf at 1 hours with the saw cut line arrowing towards the blossom.

All that is meant as metaphor of the relation between my friend and my wife. Story closed by the headline "kosher".

It is all in there with layers and layers and you do not have to know it to like it or not like it.
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