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Grahame Hamblin

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Playtime 1
« on: August 18, 2017, 01:27:18 »
trying something different
Thoughts welcome please
Grahame
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Jakov Minić

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Re: Playtime 1
« Reply #1 on: August 18, 2017, 01:30:04 »
Comfortably placed in the pillow. Works for me  :)
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Grahame Hamblin

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Re: Playtime 1
« Reply #2 on: August 18, 2017, 01:38:56 »
Thanks Jakov
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Frank Fremerey

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Re: Playtime 1
« Reply #3 on: August 20, 2017, 18:38:32 »
I always love the mysterious in photography and you managed to add some mystery to a macro shot. Continue exploring!
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Re: Playtime 1
« Reply #4 on: August 20, 2017, 22:31:27 »
I like it very much! Not too fond about the blueish/grayish patch. Not sure what it is/was, but perhaps it could be toned down a bit. It interferes a bit with the high key nature of the shot IMHO.
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Re: Playtime 1
« Reply #5 on: August 21, 2017, 00:41:12 »
Thanks Frank I now think i may have slightly over done the blur ??
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Re: Playtime 1
« Reply #6 on: August 21, 2017, 03:16:00 »
Beautifully done

I would not have added the frame
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Re: Playtime 1
« Reply #7 on: August 21, 2017, 07:30:30 »
I like the idea and think the image would benefit from less blur, with a smoother transition.
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Re: Playtime 1
« Reply #8 on: August 21, 2017, 08:41:05 »
agree it is a good idea and nice image . However, also agree the blur is perhaps not too much but certainly too sudden. A more gradual application over a greater distance might look more natural and pleasing.
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Grahame Hamblin

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Re: Playtime 1
« Reply #9 on: August 21, 2017, 21:43:16 »
Thank you all for your constructive comments its back to drawing board.
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