Thanks for the comments
I agree with the critiques about the texture on the paper, and the wardrobe getting lost into the background
I usually place the model farther away from the backdrop ... this time the "studio" was to small, but this was shot with the zoom already wider than 50mm and I was against a wall
The theme was "Gothic" and I kept the black on black merging into the background , anyhow a rim light would have nice, but the studio did not have flags or grilled lights, and it then becomes like a hose without control spilling light on more places than needed.