Better. I, personally, would still,crop tighter towards the dogs. Also, since this is in the critique section, I would have opted for a higher iso and shutter speed. Non-blurry dogs would be well worth the negligible grain in my opinion.
In shots like this, it is easy to forget about the focus of the image. It certainly feels like the dogs, but the beautiful environment can be tempting to lean on as well, which is what I feel happened. The choice of settings, focal length and composition was made to enhance the environment, while merely keeping the dogs at a good spot in the frame. If the priorities had been reversed, focusing on the dogs' interaction while keeping the environment well framed, the image would have more impact.
