NikonGear'23
Images => People, Portraits, Street, PJ & Cityscapes => Topic started by: averity on December 20, 2017, 17:37:42
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a try with my muscle man neighbour for some artistic bodybuilding shots.
maybe this would be better posted in the critique section, but I would be grateful for any suggestions/ideas/improvements on editing this series
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Nice study in light and forms.
I like #2 best.
As a suggestion i would propose a different short in photo #1. No seam and if there is a seam make sure it is "in the middle". I would also use a different colour, so that it stands out less.
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David is a strong man. Nicely done!
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#1 the shorts are quite distracting, I would turn it and crop it, his back looks really good, his head gets lost into the black , a second light with flags or grid will define the contour of his head
#2 best exposure of the 4 images
#3 I think 2 lateral lights with a grid would work best
#4 very misterious, well done, again I would have used 2 lights
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#1 the shorts are quite distracting, I would turn it and crop it, his back looks really good, his head gets lost into the black , a second light with flags or grid will define the contour of his head
#2 best exposure of the 4 images
#3 I think 2 lateral lights with a grid would work best
#4 very misterious, well done, again I would have used 2 lights
thanks Armando, I will have another go this coming year as he is planning to get bigger and stronger through even more training
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Nice study in light and forms.
I like #2 best.
As a suggestion i would propose a different short in photo #1. No seam and if there is a seam make sure it is "in the middle". I would also use a different colour, so that it stands out less.
thank you, I will keep that in mind
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David is a strong man. Nicely done!
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