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Edit Challenge #10: old bedroom
« on: December 01, 2015, 14:59:45 »
Hello

Here is the file for challenge #10
https://www.dropbox.com/s/g5461ukeueuan1h/_DSC5172.NEF?dl=0

I hope you like it

and I'm looking forward to your edits

Cheers
Armando
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Re: Edit Challenge #10: old bedroom
« Reply #1 on: December 01, 2015, 17:05:52 »
That is a great challenge! Herewith my interpretation. I included more noise/grain on purpose because it adds something to the scene, I think... I also opted for a color version. Wrt crop I went back and forth between 1 by 1 and 4 by 5. After throwing up a coin, I did choose the 1 by 1 crop. Unfortunately I was not able to recover the highlights in LR. Maybe others are more succesfull in other programs.


changes as of 12/2:
I accidentally deleted the old images (the square and 4by5), so here is a replacement, processed differently. Here processed in PN first, followed by some changes in structure, etc. I cropped differently after studying the scene more carefully. I kept a 2x3 size to stipulate the narrowness and height of the room and to give more clues about the room itself, especially after Bjørn pointed me at the existence of a surveillance camera (thanks Bjørn!). These clues trigger probably questions instead of answers.

All in all, this is my final entry:

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Re: Edit Challenge #10: old bedroom
« Reply #2 on: December 01, 2015, 17:29:54 »
Peter: you missed out on the surveillance camera :D

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Re: Edit Challenge #10: old bedroom
« Reply #3 on: December 01, 2015, 17:48:36 »
Nice image Peter! I do not think I have tried to recover the highlights, I would think they are lost, the contrast is fairly large from the inside to the sunny outside, but lets wait and see if any PN users can surprise us
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Re: Edit Challenge #10: old bedroom
« Reply #4 on: December 01, 2015, 18:04:57 »
Peter: you missed out on the surveillance camera :D

Your eyes are (way) better than mine... I will go back to the drawing board. Or change the 1x1 by the 4x5 ;-)
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Re: Edit Challenge #10: old bedroom
« Reply #5 on: December 01, 2015, 18:19:58 »
sleepless nights


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Re: Edit Challenge #10: old bedroom
« Reply #6 on: December 01, 2015, 19:12:45 »
wow, very artistic interpretation Fons, thanks
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Re: Edit Challenge #10: old bedroom
« Reply #7 on: December 01, 2015, 19:28:59 »
This is how I see it....







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Re: Edit Challenge #10: old bedroom
« Reply #8 on: December 01, 2015, 19:48:33 »
Almass:Looks like some kind of epiphany

a more straight one:
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Re: Edit Challenge #10: old bedroom
« Reply #9 on: December 01, 2015, 21:29:02 »
Not quite satisfied, but here's my current suggestion:

2015-12-01 NikonGear Edit Challenge #10 by Joergen Ramskov, on Flickr
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Re: Edit Challenge #10: old bedroom
« Reply #10 on: December 01, 2015, 22:21:31 »
My try:
Hans Cremers

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Re: Edit Challenge #10: old bedroom
« Reply #11 on: December 02, 2015, 00:35:56 »
Not quite satisfied, but here's my current suggestion:
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Jørgen, your cut is to my liking.
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Re: Edit Challenge #10: old bedroom
« Reply #12 on: December 02, 2015, 00:36:42 »
Almass:Looks like some kind of epiphany

a more straight one:
Straight... and inspiring!
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Re: Edit Challenge #10: old bedroom
« Reply #13 on: December 02, 2015, 00:39:29 »
This is how I see it....
Your BW post processing embossing the light adds to what I see in this image.
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Re: Edit Challenge #10: old bedroom
« Reply #14 on: December 02, 2015, 00:50:46 »
Aaah- boon and bane. Don't touch the poisoned linnen. It'l burn you away.

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