The brightest areas of the geyser have shown some recovery of detail, which is good and helps the photo. But the neighboring sky has become posterized, which is, IMO, not desirable. Maybe back off on the exposure reduction in the affected area. Better to have a credible highlight blowout than a fake-looking "recovery". Also, I liked the general sky and ground exposure(brightness) better in the original. No reason to make the sky too dark.