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David Paterson

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A dream of landscape
« on: July 29, 2015, 11:15:18 »
Loch Tay at her dreamiest.  (The image has been edited slightly - see Akira, below)

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Re: A dream of landscape
« Reply #1 on: July 29, 2015, 12:41:21 »
Very noisy. Bad light? Monocrome style of 1890ies
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Re: A dream of landscape
« Reply #2 on: July 29, 2015, 13:25:50 »
Very noisy. Bad light? Monocrome style of 1890ies

Yes, yes, and yes. Deliberately so.

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Re: A dream of landscape
« Reply #3 on: July 29, 2015, 15:11:47 »
Nice idea and treatment.

That said, the bright straight line extending from the boat looks a bit detracting.  Is that ship wake?
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David Paterson

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Re: A dream of landscape
« Reply #4 on: July 29, 2015, 15:39:12 »
Nice idea and treatment.
That said, the bright straight line extending from the boat looks a bit detracting.  Is that ship wake?

Thanks, Akira.

The line is the boat's wake, but you are right - it's too bright - I'll darken it a little.

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Re: A dream of landscape
« Reply #5 on: July 29, 2015, 21:24:47 »
I like the expression and to my eyes (.. mind) it is dream like.

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Re: A dream of landscape
« Reply #6 on: July 30, 2015, 00:22:48 »
Dave, noise/grain is fine.
My eye wants to shift the entire image to the right. Agree the line darkened at the right a bit.
I see so much potential in this image, such a nice mood. The colors are great.

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Re: A dream of landscape
« Reply #7 on: July 30, 2015, 02:54:59 »
It reminds me a bit of the Pictoralists style. (If I am remembering the name correctly?) I like it. I like the sharp boat against the soft landscape. This image is different.