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Jack Dahlgren

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Shoreline
« on: April 01, 2017, 19:18:09 »
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Akira

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Re: Shoreline
« Reply #1 on: April 01, 2017, 19:52:30 »
I love it.  Nice asymmetric three-layer composition.  The reflection and the flare of the sun gives a nice atmosphere.
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Re: Shoreline
« Reply #2 on: April 02, 2017, 07:02:58 »
The sun and it's reflection feel a hair off to the left.  I like off-center stuff, but when it is so close to the center it feels a bit unsettling composition-wise.
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Re: Shoreline
« Reply #3 on: April 02, 2017, 07:23:04 »
Quote from: Tristin on April 02, 2017, 07:02:58
The sun and it's reflection feel a hair off to the left.  I like off-center stuff, but when it is so close to the center it feels a bit unsettling composition-wise.
Thanks for the comment. I'll have to get out the ruler to confirm and adjust.
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