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Monument Valley
« on: August 20, 2015, 19:09:30 »
Tidying up and archiving some older files, I came across this - shot on film ca1995 and scanned but never before converted to mono. It makes a good print, but before I make a final version I'd be glad to hear some suggestions from NG members.

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Re: Monument Valley
« Reply #1 on: August 20, 2015, 19:40:39 »
Lovely, classic composition.  It reminds me of shots one might see in a well-photographed John Ford or Anthony Mann western movie.
Edit:  Even more amazing now knowing that this was taken from transparency film.  Such conversions usually don't end this well!
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Re: Monument Valley
« Reply #2 on: August 20, 2015, 19:50:50 »
Stunning!

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Re: Monument Valley
« Reply #3 on: August 20, 2015, 20:01:19 »
Very nice David!
The blacks look a bit deep in a couple of spots. Probably because I'm viewing on my Macbook Air. I imagine it would print fantastically.
When I have a chance I'll have a look using a proper monitor.

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Re: Monument Valley
« Reply #4 on: August 20, 2015, 20:17:10 »
Great!
The dark sepia rendering fits perfectly to the desert environment.
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Re: Monument Valley
« Reply #5 on: August 20, 2015, 20:22:01 »
I believe it will print beautifully
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Re: Monument Valley
« Reply #6 on: August 20, 2015, 20:51:07 »
Thank you all very much for your comments; I'm flattered.

James - since making a first print I've gone back and looked at the original piece of film (Fuji Provia 100, Pentax 67, 45mm f4 WA). I don't remember my thoughts as I shot it, but the dynamic range is so huge that something had to suffer, either highlights or shadows, and I chose to protect the highlights. The deeper shadow areas are just clear film; there's nothing there.

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Re: Monument Valley
« Reply #7 on: August 20, 2015, 21:56:20 »
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Amazing landscape, David !

I like the lighting.

Perfect composition.Very well done ! 8)
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Re: Monument Valley
« Reply #8 on: August 20, 2015, 22:08:59 »
As much as I'm not a fan of B/W, this is a cracker In my eyes due to the toning. I see an new version of an old style sepia photo.  ;D

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Re: Monument Valley
« Reply #9 on: August 21, 2015, 00:21:37 »
It's funny what the digital world has done to us all eh? I thought digital would never replace silver film/prints, but I've been proven wrong.
As a mostly B&W (or sometimes a Brown & White) photographer I was told, "never be afraid of black". I think it still holds true and I would love to see the final print.

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Re: Monument Valley
« Reply #10 on: August 21, 2015, 09:05:04 »
This is very nice. I like your conversion.
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Re: Monument Valley
« Reply #11 on: August 21, 2015, 09:58:48 »
For me as it is now it appears a bit underexposed...

So I would keep the highs and lows, but bring up the upper mid whites to make the scene appear brighter in the light areas to compensate for the deep shadows.

Super nice framing, as always ;)
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Re: Monument Valley
« Reply #12 on: August 21, 2015, 11:34:43 »
Thank you for your comments, Rosko, Mike, Jørgen and Erik.

Erik - I'll try something along the lines you suggest; the print needs something and that might be it.

James - I was a late adopter of digital, because I loved film and I loved the darkroom. But when I understood what digital can do, and what doors it opens, I went over to it completely, without regret. But I still love film, and the remarkable thing is that even when it has been digitised (scanned), film retains all the qualities which make it different to digital capture. I find it hard to say exactly what these differences are, but it is to do with the purity of colour, with film's ability to hold saturated colour without looking wrong or "pumped", and with the biting sharpness small details - something here to do with the fact that exposure and development make physical changes in the emulsion; details are, in a sense, etched into the film. So when you have a piece of film, sharp, well-exposed, with a full range of tones and that wonderful colour that Fuji film was capable of, then have it professionally scanned, the resulting file is truly thing of beauty which can even survive conversion to monochrome.

I'll swap you a print of my Monument Valley for a print of your cactus - nothing to grandiose, maybe A3 or A3+ ? I'm currently printing on Ilford Prestige Smooth Heavweight Matt; a lovely, super-smooth matt art paper with a very white base (which I favour).

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Re: Monument Valley
« Reply #13 on: August 21, 2015, 23:00:41 »
Absolutely Dave!

I've just now ordered more paper. Last print is spoken for, but as soon as I receive more paper I'll send you PM with address details.
The print is part of a series called 11X11. (Being in inches that's how I have printed these. Paper is 17X22, (sorry, in inches again.) It gives a wide border to mat and frame as one wishes. I frame them at 16X16 with a 4 inch+/- border.

Any size of your print would be fantastic! I do have a small collection of prints from friends that I met mostly at NG, plus some from close friends here in the US.
These are all treasures that I hang and appreciate greatly.