Fons the composition is fantastic. The woman looking the same way as the picture, and the husband in the background going through his newspapers.
I don't especially like the over-saturated colors in the color version. The reds are hurting my eyes.
In the BW I think the contrast is too high and the background blur on the husband is too harsh, probably due to over-sharpening.
But that's just me, you know how I like not so sharp, muddy, and blurry images