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jgould2

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Joshua Tree
« on: August 20, 2018, 17:07:32 »
Hi all.

Here is a photo of a sunrise in Joshua Tree National Park in California.

As always, any comments, criticism or advice very welcome.

JIM

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Jan Anne

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Re: Joshua Tree
« Reply #1 on: August 20, 2018, 19:23:11 »
Maybe a little too much empty black space?

Probably would have used a lower angle for this shot but maybe the composition could be improved with the horizon on the lower on third instead of so close to the middle?
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Re: Joshua Tree
« Reply #2 on: August 20, 2018, 20:24:21 »
Hi Jan.

Thanks so much for your advice.

JIM
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Re: Joshua Tree
« Reply #3 on: August 27, 2018, 02:23:01 »
Dynamite sky and a nice composition.
I agree with Jan Anne that the large dark area is problematic.  One solution might be to crop away the dark zone, or if the original is a raw file, the detail in the lower area could possibly be made more visible.
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Re: Joshua Tree
« Reply #4 on: September 02, 2018, 22:04:56 »
Thanks Keith.

I appreciate the advice.

JIM
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