I will be honest with you. I think this shot might be stronger. Proper separation of subjects is important in this kind of shots, especially regarding the main subject. The fact that the guy has two hats and some spare limbs is a bit unfortunate. By moving two steps to the right and taking a lower position you could separate him, place him on a nicer dark background with his hat on a contrasting bkgd of the roof, add a bit of more dramatic perspective and also reveal the other guy. It could have made the shot stronger.