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Images => Critique => Topic started by: Grahame Hamblin on August 18, 2017, 01:27:18

Title: Playtime 1
Post by: Grahame Hamblin on August 18, 2017, 01:27:18

trying something different
Thoughts welcome please
Grahame

Title: Re: Playtime 1
Post by: Jakov Minić on August 18, 2017, 01:30:04

Comfortably placed in the pillow. Works for me  :)

Title: Re: Playtime 1
Post by: Grahame Hamblin on August 18, 2017, 01:38:56

Thanks Jakov

Title: Re: Playtime 1
Post by: Frank Fremerey on August 20, 2017, 18:38:32

I always love the mysterious in photography and you managed to add some mystery to a macro shot. Continue exploring!

Title: Re: Playtime 1
Post by: HCS on August 20, 2017, 22:31:27

I like it very much! Not too fond about the blueish/grayish patch. Not sure what it is/was, but perhaps it could be toned down a bit. It interferes a bit with the high key nature of the shot IMHO.

Title: Re: Playtime 1
Post by: Grahame Hamblin on August 21, 2017, 00:41:12

Thanks Frank I now think i may have slightly over done the blur ??
Grahae

Title: Re: Playtime 1
Post by: armando_m on August 21, 2017, 03:16:00

Beautifully done

I would not have added the frame

Title: Re: Playtime 1
Post by: Olivier on August 21, 2017, 07:30:30

I like the idea and think the image would benefit from less blur, with a smoother transition.

Title: Re: Playtime 1
Post by: Mongo on August 21, 2017, 08:41:05

agree it is a good idea and nice image . However, also agree the blur is perhaps not too much but certainly too sudden. A more gradual application over a greater distance might look more natural and pleasing.

Title: Re: Playtime 1
Post by: Grahame Hamblin on August 21, 2017, 21:43:16

Thank you all for your constructive comments its back to drawing board.