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Images => People, Portraits, Street, PJ & Cityscapes => Topic started by: armando_m on October 29, 2016, 22:59:08

Title: portrait - smile
Post by: armando_m on October 29, 2016, 22:59:08

From a costumes contest

Window light, and sun hitting the floor

D800 + 85mm f1.8G

Title: Re: portrait - smile
Post by: Airy on October 29, 2016, 23:04:54

perfect

appears slightly gritty-grainy, but probably OK, to be tested on a "real" print.

picture (curtains, model) look titled towards the left, but it does not disturb me. Brings some "movement".

Title: Re: portrait - smile
Post by: armando_m on October 29, 2016, 23:12:08

It is an ISO 1600 film simulation - Silver efex pro
and I decided to leave the tilt to the left

Thanks for commenting Airy

Title: Re: portrait - smile
Post by: Airy on October 29, 2016, 23:24:26

We agree on the tilt. Since however the grain was deliberately introduced (not D800-like, indeed), what about a softer one ?

Title: Re: portrait - smile
Post by: Jakov Minić on October 29, 2016, 23:33:11

The tilt, the 1600 ISO, and the model are fantastic :)

Title: Re: portrait - smile
Post by: armando_m on October 29, 2016, 23:49:08

Thanks Jakov

Quote from: Airy on October 29, 2016, 23:24:26

We agree on the tilt. Since however the grain was deliberately introduced (not D800-like, indeed), what about a softer one ?

Without added grain

Title: Re: portrait - smile
Post by: Jakov Minić on October 29, 2016, 23:51:42

Without added grain, and even softer, with more glow.

Title: Re: portrait - smile
Post by: Airy on October 29, 2016, 23:56:58

even better I think.

Title: Re: portrait - smile
Post by: Akira on October 30, 2016, 02:41:02

Fantastic poprtrait as it is.  To me, the ISO1600 grain doesn't look effective enough and the image can go well without it.

Title: Re: portrait - smile
Post by: elsa hoffmann on October 30, 2016, 06:53:05

The interaction between you and the lady says it all. Beautiful.

Title: Re: portrait - smile
Post by: Erik Lund on October 31, 2016, 09:57:11

Second version makes her look a lot better especially her skin!