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Images => Nature, Flora, Fauna & Landscapes => Topic started by: atpaula on March 29, 2016, 13:14:40

Title: Lake at dusk
Post by: atpaula on March 29, 2016, 13:14:40

D4s & Otus 28mm.

(https://nikongear.net/revival/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi1011.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Faf237%2Fatpaula%2Fatpaula010%2FaD4S_4030_zpsuznsppqz.jpg&hash=fdc4a1e1bb11c5a9929d3c804261eec881bf7c52) (http://s1011.photobucket.com/user/atpaula/media/atpaula010/aD4S_4030_zpsuznsppqz.jpg.html)

Title: Re: Lake at dusk
Post by: Bjørn Rørslett on March 29, 2016, 14:34:27

Vere serene and tranquil atmosphere ... The bright areas of the sky makes the contrast a little heavy, though. Perhaps pull down in editing or crop off?

Title: Re: Lake at dusk
Post by: Frank Fremerey on March 29, 2016, 15:28:09

I love the boat and the reflection in the water very much.

Could you try a remix with the sky cut to a minimum and the cityscape by the shore as a brightend up counter weight?

Title: Re: Lake at dusk
Post by: elsa hoffmann on March 29, 2016, 20:37:34

beautiful and well spotted.

Title: Re: Lake at dusk
Post by: atpaula on March 30, 2016, 04:28:14

Thank you guys for the comments and suggestions.
I agree that cropping the top would improve somehow the image.
Frank,
to be honest, that would be too much for me. If I have to do all that pp in a picture, I'd rather toss it in the trash bin, if the moment caught is not very precious.

Title: Re: Lake at dusk
Post by: atpaula on March 30, 2016, 23:53:25

New version.....

(https://nikongear.net/revival/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi1011.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Faf237%2Fatpaula%2Fatpaula010%2FaabD4S_4030_zpstx68yruc.jpg&hash=f5fa723c8788e6ca22984f21d5ba4c843bc3913e) (http://s1011.photobucket.com/user/atpaula/media/atpaula010/aabD4S_4030_zpstx68yruc.jpg.html)

Title: Re: Lake at dusk
Post by: Frank Fremerey on March 31, 2016, 18:31:49

I like it that way.

Title: Re: Lake at dusk
Post by: Anirban Halder on March 31, 2016, 18:59:49

Painting like photo. I like the second version as well.

Title: Re: Lake at dusk
Post by: atpaula on March 31, 2016, 19:52:39

Thank you guys.
I have to admit that I prefer the first version.