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Images => Nature, Flora, Fauna & Landscapes => Topic started by: Jørgen Ramskov on March 14, 2016, 14:21:06

Title: A swan at sunset
Post by: Jørgen Ramskov on March 14, 2016, 14:21:06
Taken this past weekend. C&C always welcome.

(https://farm2.staticflickr.com/1697/25662570222_8616e692a0_b.jpg) (https://flic.kr/p/F6Ho4h)
Untitled (https://flic.kr/p/F6Ho4h) by Joergen Ramskov (https://www.flickr.com/photos/jramskov/), on Flickr
Title: Re: A swan at sunset
Post by: elsa hoffmann on March 14, 2016, 15:28:40
I like.
Title: Re: A swan at sunset
Post by: BW on March 14, 2016, 16:05:32
It wouldnt hurt my eyes to see a 16:9 crop of this image. Crop away the bottom of the picture and repost :)
Title: Re: A swan at sunset
Post by: Jørgen Ramskov on March 14, 2016, 16:13:01
Thanks for the comments. Here's a 16:9 crop, a good suggestion I like:

(https://farm2.staticflickr.com/1511/25155628554_0955dd751c_b.jpg) (https://flic.kr/p/EjVaXG)
Swan at sunset - 16:9 crop (https://flic.kr/p/EjVaXG) by Joergen Ramskov (https://www.flickr.com/photos/jramskov/), on Flickr
Title: Re: A swan at sunset
Post by: Anthony on March 14, 2016, 16:20:10
Very beautiful, both versions, the elegance of the swan and the glorious colours.

On balance, I prefer the original crop - I find it slightly more dynamic and unconventional.
Title: Re: A swan at sunset
Post by: FredCrowBear on March 14, 2016, 17:15:25
Very well seen and executed! 
I like the second (16:9) crop better, as it emphasizes the horizontal elements of the photo. 
Well done.
Title: Re: A swan at sunset
Post by: Jakov Minić on March 14, 2016, 17:48:07
Jørgen, you have a winner there!
Title: Re: A swan at sunset
Post by: Tristin on March 14, 2016, 17:52:25
Very well seen and executed! 
I like the second (16:9) crop better, as it emphasizes the horizontal elements of the photo. 
Well done.

What he said^
Title: Re: A swan at sunset
Post by: BW on March 14, 2016, 19:24:18
I like the 16:9 crop better. The backlit swan reflected in the water, the deep shadow and golden highlight creates a wonderful moody and peaceful picture. Get it up on the wall!
Title: Re: A swan at sunset
Post by: Akira on March 14, 2016, 19:27:48
In this particular case, I also prefer the 16:9 crop.  It is a fantastic image!
Title: Re: A swan at sunset
Post by: David Paterson on March 14, 2016, 19:32:01
Yes, beautiful image.
Title: Re: A swan at sunset
Post by: Jørgen Ramskov on March 14, 2016, 19:40:26
Thanks a lot for all the comments. On the wall you say, hrm...maybe I should try that.
Title: Re: A swan at sunset
Post by: John Geerts on March 14, 2016, 19:42:23
Impressive colours and tone.  Although the crop is better I immediately envisaged a portrait version. But the image is so strong, all would fit, I guess.
Title: Re: A swan at sunset
Post by: rosko on March 14, 2016, 20:12:20
That's a beautiful one, Jørgen !

It deserves to be printed and framed... ;)

Well done !
Title: Re: A swan at sunset
Post by: Jørgen Ramskov on March 14, 2016, 21:17:16
Impressive colours and tone.  Although the crop is better I immediately envisaged a portrait version. But the image is so strong, all would fit, I guess.

Your wish is my command, here's a go at a portrait version.
(https://farm2.staticflickr.com/1493/25792948835_a93df909c2_b.jpg) (https://flic.kr/p/FieB5p)
Swan at sunset - portrait crop (https://flic.kr/p/FieB5p) by Joergen Ramskov (https://www.flickr.com/photos/jramskov/), on Flickr

Thanks again for all the feedback, it is much appreciated.
Title: Re: A swan at sunset
Post by: John Geerts on March 14, 2016, 21:44:42
Thanks Jørgen  ;)

I love it.
Title: Re: A swan at sunset
Post by: Knut S on March 14, 2016, 22:36:04
The 16:9 is definatly wallworthy.. ;)
Title: Re: A swan at sunset
Post by: JohnBrew on March 15, 2016, 02:06:39
Simply gorgeous!
Title: Re: A swan at sunset
Post by: Jørgen Ramskov on March 15, 2016, 10:16:25
I'm quite positively suprised by all the response I have gotten, thanks again.
Title: Re: A swan at sunset
Post by: Les Olson on March 15, 2016, 11:20:41
I think it is a lovely image, but ....

... the "swan at evening" is a very old and powerful symbol, and an image that carries an enormous amount of baggage.  This applies especially to the Celtic tradition, in which the souls of the dead are believed to take the form of a swan as they pass to the other world, so each swan on a lake in the evening is a recently dead person.  The swan has been a symbol everywhere, however - in Wagner's "Parsifal" the swan symbolises beings without consciousness but in the divine realm and Ludwig II took that up in Neuschwanstein - etc etc. 

I think your image, with the picturesque element of the golden water, refers to the swan as a symbol without saying anything about it, and I think the image would be stronger if it either had some background that might extend the range of reference or was nearer a picture of a swan that clearly did not invoke traditional symbolism.   
Title: Re: A swan at sunset
Post by: Jørgen Ramskov on March 15, 2016, 13:10:22
Les: Thanks for your detailed comment, I had no idea it was such a powerful symbol.
Title: Re: A swan at sunset
Post by: Anirban Halder on March 15, 2016, 15:09:09
I like the 16:9 crop. Very powerful image Jørgen. Wonderful!
And a great example of backlit image. :)
Title: Re: A swan at sunset
Post by: Frank Fremerey on March 15, 2016, 15:14:30
I feel the edit in #14 seems most effective in my eyes.