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Images => People, Portraits, Street, PJ & Cityscapes => Topic started by: John Geerts on August 21, 2015, 00:27:20

Title: Vacuumcleaners
Post by: John Geerts on August 21, 2015, 00:27:20

Not used late in the evening...

Title: Re: Vacuumcleaners
Post by: Erik Lund on August 21, 2015, 09:45:51

Nice capture, I like the subject, but I would go back and try to do it more graphical and see if the back ground could be excluded somehow....

Title: Re: Vacuumcleaners
Post by: elsa hoffmann on August 21, 2015, 10:36:35

I agree with Erik. Lots of potential with editing

Title: Re: Vacuumcleaners
Post by: Frank Fremerey on August 21, 2015, 11:42:07

I like to see a clean pattern repetition here too. Play with the angle
and the depth.

Title: Re: Vacuumcleaners
Post by: Erik Lund on August 21, 2015, 11:53:02

Yes consider both a re-shoot and different post processing. If you feel like it!!!  ;)

Title: Re: Vacuumcleaners
Post by: John Geerts on August 21, 2015, 20:36:27

Erik, Elsa and Frank  thank you all for your tips and advise.   I just stumbled across the (new) cleaners  with a 50mm 1.8  only, and there was not much space to navigate 'cause of parked cars. 

I shall look into the different post-processing and a reshoot.

This was the original RAW by the way.

Title: Re: Vacuumcleaners
Post by: Erik Lund on August 21, 2015, 20:47:56

Sure do a reshoot maybe low angle and as wide angle fl as possible:)
Have fun!

Title: Re: Vacuumcleaners
Post by: John Geerts on August 21, 2015, 20:50:46

Thanks Erik. That's always fun, of course  ;)

Title: Re: Vacuumcleaners
Post by: John Geerts on September 18, 2015, 09:07:27

A reshoot with Nikkor AF-S F/2.8  17-35  at 17mm 

Not really satisfied yet, but it's in progress   ;)

Title: Re: Vacuumcleaners
Post by: Frank Fremerey on September 18, 2015, 09:45:32

I feel that this project is on a good way. The repetition of forms and the color contrast really make the picture.

Of course the light is really bad anmd I feel yozu should be farther away to make for a flatter field. Is it possible to shoot this at 90mm for perfect geometry?

And maybe do an HDR to retain all detail in the high lights?