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Images => Nature, Flora, Fauna & Landscapes => Topic started by: David Paterson on August 19, 2015, 13:37:56

Title: Inula in the twilight zone
Post by: David Paterson on August 19, 2015, 13:37:56
Our inula has really only flowered in the last week, so the flowers are still very fresh. For many kinds of botanical shots I love the light when there is almost no light, and this was shot as dusk fell. A partly cloudy sky with some lingering sunset colours prevented there being too much of a blue cast.
Title: Re: Inula in the twilight zone
Post by: Frank Fremerey on August 19, 2015, 13:41:48
This composition does not appeal to my like your other work I value very high.

I guess there are too many elements with the same weight, no point of emphasis but also in this equal weighted field no graphical structure that would allow the components to integrate to something pleasing.
Title: Re: Inula in the twilight zone
Post by: Bjørn Rørslett on August 19, 2015, 14:30:44
Perceptionally closing the Inula field by some cropping on the left would help quite a bit, I think. Flowers aim themselves to this kind of "carpet subjects".

Which species of Inula is this? I had I. britannica in mind but that is not a species I have personal experience with.
Title: Re: Inula in the twilight zone
Post by: Fons Baerken on August 19, 2015, 14:51:17
i think I. hookeri
Title: Re: Inula in the twilight zone
Post by: David Paterson on August 19, 2015, 15:35:33
Thanks for the comments. Fons is correct - hookeri.

Frank and Bjørn - I think I was too interested in the quality of the light and rather neglected composition. I am attaching the original image, re-cropped along the lines suggested by Bjørn, and a second image which has more of a graphic feel, with some space and movement.
Title: Re: Inula in the twilight zone
Post by: Bjørn Rørslett on August 19, 2015, 18:58:44
No wonder I didn't find this species in my Flora Europaea - it's from Himalaya ... :D
Title: Re: Inula in the twilight zone
Post by: David Paterson on August 21, 2015, 13:30:45
No wonder I didn't find this species in my Flora Europaea - it's from Himalaya ... :D

Yes, old Sir Joseph Hooker - Victorian plant-hunter extraordinaire and Himalayan specialist.
Title: Re: Inula in the twilight zone
Post by: Fons Baerken on August 21, 2015, 15:14:16
Interesting variety is also the Inula magnifica 'Sonnenstrahl'.
Title: Re: Inula in the twilight zone
Post by: David Paterson on August 21, 2015, 17:27:02
Interesting variety is also the Inula magnifica 'Sonnenstrahl'.

Yes - well-named - a magnificent plant, but with a mature height of 2-2.5m, that's not what we have in our garden.

Hookeri -
Title: Re: Inula in the twilight zone
Post by: Akira on August 21, 2015, 18:02:25
Love the rhythm created by the flowers.
Title: Re: Inula in the twilight zone
Post by: Frank Fremerey on August 21, 2015, 19:17:53
The detail shot saved the thread for good.