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HCS

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Different kind of stack
« on: May 19, 2017, 19:42:31 »
Yes, flowers again, but now not stacked "to death". Tried to give the one shot feeling, yet this is a 14 image stack.

Interested in how this is perceived.
Hans Cremers

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Re: Different kind of stack
« Reply #1 on: May 19, 2017, 19:47:55 »
Hans:

I like the concept and the selective focus on the back flower. 

In a perfect world, I would prefer not to have the OOF petal of the foreground plant blocking part of the sharp plant, and would also consider a modest crop up from the bottom to downplay the mass and impact of the OOF foreground on the image.

Personal taste really.

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Re: Different kind of stack
« Reply #2 on: May 19, 2017, 20:30:58 »
To me, the success hinges on the unsharp areas including those in the front. You won't get any criticism from my on that score. There is, however, a green leaf jutting through the left upper part of the frame that I could do without.

A seasoned close-up photographer might be just a tad puzzled about the overall distribution of sharpness , but it takes a trained eye to see something is "amiss".

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Re: Different kind of stack
« Reply #3 on: May 19, 2017, 22:55:14 »
Thank you Randy and Bjørn.

Randy, the unsharp foreground bit is intentional and i'm glad the master commented on it. I picked up the tip that a good photo needs an imperfection from Bjørn.

Bjørn, the oof green leave is a stacking artifact and i thought long and hard whether to "correct" it or leave it in. I decided to leave it in, i'll give it a go to clone it out.

Thanks very much for your attention and tips gentlemen!
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Anthony

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Re: Different kind of stack
« Reply #4 on: May 20, 2017, 00:31:00 »
The first thing that struck me was the colours, very beautiful.  I agree with getting rid of the green artefact.
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Re: Different kind of stack
« Reply #5 on: May 20, 2017, 01:03:08 »
beautiful colors, the selective focus works really well
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Re: Different kind of stack
« Reply #6 on: May 20, 2017, 14:26:17 »
Thank you Anthony and Armando.
Hans Cremers