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Tristin

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Industrial neighborhood
« on: April 02, 2017, 07:00:40 »
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Re: Industrial neighborhood
« Reply #1 on: April 02, 2017, 09:53:37 »
Impact would be stronger if only the greenery on right side had been present. Now, the vegetation merely acts as the textbook-type framing instead of providing contrast in from, shape, and function to whatever metallic structures are in the background.

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Re: Industrial neighborhood
« Reply #2 on: April 03, 2017, 04:43:59 »
I love the combination of natural beauty(the trees and sky) with the down-and-out human-constructed stuff.  Classic theme...I never get tired of it.
You've done an almost perfect job of balancing the subjects in the 1.5:1 frame --- 3 or 4 structures, 2 trees and 1 sky --- into a composition. However, no one subject stands out.
That'd be my observation.
Keith B., Santa Monica, CA, USA