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Andrea B.

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Edit Challenge #1: Echinacea with Bumblebees
« on: August 06, 2015, 02:37:47 »
What would you do when editing this photo shot into the stems of an Echinacea forest ?
Crop? HDR? Soften the details? Add a glowy overlay?
Make it a black & white? Or sepia-toned?
Emphasize the stems? the flowers? the bees?
Be wild, be cautious, be whatever with your edits as long as you are having fun.

Download the raw, then convert/edit it in your favorite converter/editor
and post it to this thread.

Or you may postprocess it if you are so inclined.  ;D ;D ;D
In a week or so, I will look through the submissions and pick a "Winner".

But note that Winners may be picked on a whim - or a coin toss - and winning means nothing except the joy of being the next person to provide us all with a raw file to edit for the next Edit Challenge. It is a lot of fun to see the different ways folks edit and the different thoughts they have about how a photo should look.

Part of the challenge with this photo is that the colour needs to be corrected.
Look up Echinacea purpurea to get an idea of its colours.
The bumblebee has yellow & orange bands.
DROPBOX LINK:  https://www.dropbox.com/s/yxwc1szbsb1d1j6/echinaceaPurpurea_visSun_20150804charlotteRhoadesSwhME_38099.nef?dl=0

Here is a bit of help for the Echinacea colours. This variety is not too saturated for the petal colour.

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Re: Edit Challenge #1: Echinacea with Bumblebees
« Reply #1 on: August 06, 2015, 03:00:44 »
Here's a quick take of mine.  Please download the file to view in the originally posted size.
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Re: Edit Challenge #1: Echinacea with Bumblebees
« Reply #2 on: August 06, 2015, 04:05:10 »
Quick take.
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Re: Edit Challenge #1: Echinacea with Bumblebees
« Reply #3 on: August 06, 2015, 13:30:18 »
this is my acid/funky version  8)
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Re: Edit Challenge #1: Echinacea with Bumblebees
« Reply #4 on: August 06, 2015, 13:34:49 »
Great we do it here too!
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Re: Edit Challenge #1: Echinacea with Bumblebees
« Reply #5 on: August 06, 2015, 19:10:45 »
wonderful colors

I enjoyed playing with the file

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Andrea B.

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Re: Edit Challenge #1: Echinacea with Bumblebees
« Reply #6 on: August 06, 2015, 21:38:47 »
Lots of pixels there if you anyone wants to try some crops?
This is from another version of the same scene.

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Re: Edit Challenge #1: Echinacea with Bumblebees
« Reply #7 on: August 06, 2015, 22:23:12 »
A couple of different crops:






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Re: Edit Challenge #1: Echinacea with Bumblebees
« Reply #8 on: August 06, 2015, 23:29:43 »
Trying the large version
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Re: Edit Challenge #1: Echinacea with Bumblebees
« Reply #9 on: August 07, 2015, 03:04:49 »
unfortunately the framing does not suit both flowers... i would have framed them both or gotten closer to each one at a time..  i assume this was a UV-Nikkor 105/4.5

the BG could use more suppression than i attempted.. but since i use smart objects i can always go back and increase it.  :)

also i would have used Adobe colorspace instead of sRGB.

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Re: Edit Challenge #1: Echinacea with Bumblebees
« Reply #10 on: August 07, 2015, 03:21:00 »
i guess you could do something like this.. i would have concentrated on the flower on the right since it has more interesting bees without losing the pedals.

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Re: Edit Challenge #1: Echinacea with Bumblebees
« Reply #11 on: August 07, 2015, 07:30:02 »
a straight edit. Color fidelity was important and softness to suit the topic.
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Re: Edit Challenge #1: Echinacea with Bumblebees
« Reply #12 on: August 07, 2015, 07:33:18 »
Øivind Tøien, I like your detail extraction!
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Re: Edit Challenge #1: Echinacea with Bumblebees
« Reply #13 on: August 07, 2015, 08:20:15 »
Very good idea by the way.  Many options possible here ;)




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Re: Edit Challenge #1: Echinacea with Bumblebees
« Reply #14 on: August 07, 2015, 15:25:21 »
BTW, I apologize for the slightly "off" colours. It has nothing to do with aRGB or sRGB. This photo was made on my full spectrum D600 using a Baader UV/IR Cut filter which does not perfectly restore the original colours. So you might have to work on those greens & pinks as part of the Challenge if you choose a realistic interpretation. (That's why I left a little profiled sample of the pinks in the introductory post. Of course, the precise colour is not particularly important.)

I deliberately made some non-standard compositional shots. Gotta shake things up sometimes. Here is a strange crop from another version of the scene.

Corner Bumblebees