NikonGear'23

Images => Critique => Topic started by: chals on January 16, 2019, 00:24:59

Title: Second try
Post by: chals on January 16, 2019, 00:24:59

With Micro-Nikkor 55mm f3.5 pre Ai

Title: Re: Second try
Post by: Jack Dahlgren on January 16, 2019, 01:26:21

This photo has a number of things I often find myself taking photos of - wires, sky, evening light in general - but I'm not sure how they combine to tell a story or build a coherent composition. What is it you are trying to say with the image?

Title: Re: Second try
Post by: chals on January 16, 2019, 02:23:41

Just the impression I got at the sight. It was more than I hoped for in dark. I like the picture. I thought impressions of the picture itself was where to start. Not wires or landposts everywhere else. It is not about what I want to tell. I just like the picture.  I’ll dont give up yet. Other responses might differ.

Title: Re: Second try
Post by: chals on January 16, 2019, 02:37:26

There is a kind of story to it  though. I am passing by someone elses property, as many others do. A common sight, a little place of some beauty when passing by. If you are observant. 

Title: Re: Second try
Post by: Birna Rørslett on January 16, 2019, 09:55:14

The unexpected elements juxtaposed in an everyday setting. That's all right with me.